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Post by earthman on Aug 21, 2007 1:47:34 GMT -4
It's me again...I wrote the first verse of this like a year and a half ago, but it never went anywhere. Then all of a sudden last night I had the tune stuck in my head, and just started throwing random old unused & recycled lines in there, and they sorta fit, so I rewrote it about 20 minutes ago. I personally think this is pretty cool, but I'd be more interested to hear what you think. I'm calling it "Pretty Kamikaze," for now anyway.
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left in the wild and beguiled by the likes of men a little lost child and her cold-cut friend swatting flies away, her eyes are gray and listlessly they roam the victim of a monologue, she's a riddle with no home
pretty kamikaze girl, a fertile stem-cell mind befriends the other bastard orphan lines mapping out her fears for future years she runs to be forgot a carbon copy of herself, a book without a plot
dead although she never died she finds her slow way home and cries "I don't believe in broken bones yes I fought the sun and nearly won but in the end it's true: if you were with me you'd be pretty kamikaze too."
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Post by iiholly on Aug 23, 2007 11:37:07 GMT -4
Don't like it.
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Post by Skeleton Keys on Aug 23, 2007 12:33:20 GMT -4
Nice. Sounds like something I wrote a while ago...
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Post by earthman on Aug 23, 2007 16:44:54 GMT -4
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Post by iiholly on Aug 24, 2007 11:49:21 GMT -4
capitalist bastard
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Post by earthman on Aug 24, 2007 15:29:35 GMT -4
Socialist.....dink.
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Post by iiholly on Aug 27, 2007 12:50:01 GMT -4
Dink? You automatically lose for using that. You fascist prick.
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Post by earthman on Aug 28, 2007 0:11:06 GMT -4
Anarchist...babysitter.
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Post by iiholly on Aug 30, 2007 12:02:43 GMT -4
Booger lips.
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Post by Tonja Renee on Aug 30, 2007 12:44:18 GMT -4
Now now... stop with all the name calling and kiss already...
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Post by earthman on Aug 30, 2007 13:34:21 GMT -4
I doubt if she'd be interested, what with my....booger lips.
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Post by iiholly on Sept 4, 2007 11:43:17 GMT -4
That and the fetus face.
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Post by Akira on Sept 4, 2007 16:18:31 GMT -4
...lmao.
That is all.
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Post by earthman on Sept 4, 2007 22:27:56 GMT -4
I can't do this anymore, it hurts me too much.
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Post by iiholly on Nov 16, 2007 12:21:53 GMT -4
I'd kick you in the shin to add to the pain.
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jeffhx
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wait for that crescendo!
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Post by jeffhx on Nov 16, 2007 14:02:38 GMT -4
i know a shin holly wudn kick
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hdj
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"Hey, Zakk Mylde, let's kick it up a notch"
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Post by hdj on Nov 16, 2007 15:59:44 GMT -4
Ya'll ain't right!
All I could think of was Cartman saying "I'll kick you in the nuts" after the shin kicking post....
Anyway, good lyrics, not my style, but they are good....
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Post by earthman on Nov 16, 2007 17:52:18 GMT -4
Thanks, man.
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